Audience Feedback

Here is some audience feedback I obtained from Nicola, who represents my target audience.

Final Cut

In my final cut i added the titles that were hand written and then created in illustrator 

The shots of Sarah towards the end are breaking the fourth wall by looking at the camera, this give extra intensity for the audience

With breaking the fourth wall the audience can connote that sarah is a threat to the audience 

Final Cut With ident

Issues with this cut:

Some camera recorded audio has been left in the edit causing sound problems.
The film title is not on screen for long enough.
Following feedback from other media students and my teacher, I feel that the film ending is still a little ambiguous, so I have decided to simplify the sequence in a way that suggests to the viewer that the protagonist is about to kill the antagonist in the graveyard
I have decided to redo some of my titles so that they fit better with industry conventions.

How i created my titles

• Initially I wrote  out the titles on a piece of paper with felt tip pen.
• I then scanned the paper with help of Mr. Zomerplaag
• Then putting the scanning on the computer and putting it on illustrator I edited the text to look smoother and like they are electronic
• I used this method to get the initially messy handwriting theme that i wanted for my titles
• I took influence from the titles of heathers

Evaluation questions four and five

Production Schedule