Showing posts with label rough cut four. Show all posts
Showing posts with label rough cut four. Show all posts

Friday, 12 February 2016

Rough cut five



Feedback:

  • the music works - however it sounds like it is on a loop
  • where is the changing point (volta) in the music
  • the titles don't fit the genre
What is in this cut:
  • titles
  • title of "Neighbours"
  • non-diegetic music created on garageband
  • all the scenes 
What isn't in this cut:
  • Final titles 
  • scene three
  • ending