Screenplay and shotlist

Scene one 

Girls getting ready Sarah in Niamh's room and Izzie in Tia room. Shown alarm clock , two on screen ( split screen ) then the screen showing Sarah widens , we then see a sequence of her getting up , to the bathroom , makeup , clothes breakfast. Though out this show glimpses of Izzie getting ready , not showing faces through hole thing.

Scene two 

Walk out of their houses we then see that the live next to each other , leave walking opposite directions.

Scene three 

( in school reception )
Pink girls walk into school , flick hair shots and on phone shots. No diegetic sound involving laughter   and the sound of phones going off. Sarah then walks in late to the slow and loud sound of a clock ticking that matches her footsteps. we then see the girls sat in a class together all talking , and Sarah looking through the door window at them , she follows them and listens in to their convocation.

Scene four 

We see a funeral and Sarah hidden in a bush around the church , dressed in normal clothes showing no respect. while we are shown the funeral we see flash backs of girls in a field and old photos that give us the indication that they used to be friends.



WE shot in the order of ; scene five , scene 4 scene 1 scene 2 scene 3 and then the extras.
This was because a lot of our scenes were based outside and therefore weather dependant. We also had to take into consideration the timetable of the girls , as they had revision and personally matters that may have propound our filming. The "extra bits" were bits that i included to give the opening more narrative enigma and signifiers through the opening they also helped the reader to understand clearly.

Casting

Cast 

Protagonist One - Sarah
Protagonist Two - Izzy
Side Pink Girl one - Tia
Side Pink Girl two - Amy

Sarah getting ready (scene one) - Niamh directing
Izzy getting ready (scene one) - Rian Directing
Girls running through field (scene three) - Niamh directing

Co-Directing throughout all other scenes.

Screen play - Niamh and Rian
Story boards - Niamh and Rian
Call sheet - Niamh and Rian

No sound person - only non-diegetic music in the background and sound effects

Improved screenplay

Scene one 

Girls getting ready
 Sarah  (Niamh's room)

• View of bedroom panning over to her bed.
• We hear the alarm going off. 
• Hand homes out from under the duvet and knocks the alarm off the desk along with other objects.
• Moves duvet from over head and sits up abruptly. 
• Stands up and film a tracking shot following her downstairs to the kitchen.
• Shoot her back seeing what she is wearing.
• Gets cereal out spills it - giving us a title 
• Gets milk out - shuts fridge - note on the fridge another title
• Slump walk back upstairs and goes back to bed 

Izzy (Tias room)

• Shot crosses over - creating a split screen
• Her alarm goes off. 
• see girl with face mask on laying neatly in pink duvet
• Places hand on the alarm clock
• Gets up smiling 
• Tracking shot to back room - looking in mirror

Sarah (Niamhs room)

• Looks in mirror 

(See both girls looking at camera - we see their faces)

Izzy (Tias bathroom)

• Does make up into camera

Sarah (niamhs bathroom)

• Brushes hair and walk out 

Izzy (tias bathroom)

• does make-up
• switch shots to behind izzy - spills make-up showing another title

 Shown alarm clock, both actors on screen ( split screen )
The screen showing Sarah widens, we then see a sequence of her getting up, walking to the bathroom. 
Titles possibly in makeup, clothes and breakfast - cereal -
Through out this showing glimpses of Izzy getting ready.
Camera shots on clothes and semiotics - not showing protagonists faces.

Scene two 

(Extreme long shot - both houses in shot)

Walk out of their houses simultaneously - different walks showing different personalities 

• Sarah walking at a pace putting rucksack on shoulder 
• Izzy walking out strutting and looking around
• Both exit driveway at the same time - not making eye contact.
• Walk separate ways

We then see that the live next to each other, leave walking opposite directions.
Both on screen (shared driveway - walk out together)

Scene three 

( in school reception )

• Izzy, Amy and Tia walk through the entrance as the doors open. In triangle formation. 
• Keep walking towards camera 
• Walk past we see the doors shutting in Sarahs face - sarah looks panicked.
• someone lets sarah in she then walks in towards the camera (front on)

Scene four 

• We see girls (izzy, tia and amy) surrounding a grave (Ilkley cemetery)
• Sarah hidden in a bush around the church, dressed in normal clothes watching the girls. 
• While we are shown the the group looking down at graves; we see flash backs of girls in a field and old photos that give us the indication that they used to be friends.

(Faded shot) Sarahs face - then continues with her business. 

• two small girls running in a  field
• faded screens
• sketchy playing of old videos

Scene five 

• Girls walk through the drive way
• stop
• make eye contact then continue walking next to eachother 
• Black out - bang title of film appears on screen.
• Flash on screen - photo of girl getting crossed out 

Both girls walk into shared driveway - make eye contact (shot reverse shot)
continue to walk into house - tracking shot of sarah into her house
(Low shot) Sarah - crossing picture of wall of girl

screen play

Screen play 

Scene one 

Girls getting ready Sarah in Niamh's room and Izzie in Tia room. Shown alarm clock , two on screen ( split screen ) then the screen showing Sarah widens , we then see a sequence of her getting up , to the bathroom , makeup , clothes breakfast. Though out this show glimpses of Izzie getting ready , not showing faces through hole thing.

Scene two 

Walk out of their houses we then see that the live next to each other , leave walking opposite directions.

Scene three 

( in school reception )
Pink girls walk into school , flick hair shots and on phone shots. No diegetic sound involving laughter   and the sound of phones going off. Sarah then walks in late to the slow and loud sound of a clock ticking that matches her footsteps. we then see the girls sat in a class together all talking , and Sarah looking through the door window at them , she follows them and listens in to their convocation.

Scene four 

We see a funeral and Sarah hidden in a bush around the church , dressed in normal clothes showing no respect. while we are shown the funeral we see flash backs of girls in a field and old photos that give us the indication that they used to be friends.

Filming Tyrannosaur swede

Wednesday re-shoot of Tyrannosaur

For each scene we had different roles. We had a director, producer (who also produced the call sheet), actors, cinematographers and people to created the story boards and the screenplays. This all came together whilst shooting. The story board and call sheet are created in the order we are going to film the scene in. For all three scenes the story board and call sheets didn't exactly match up due to ad-libbing and some semiotic changes.

First we shot the Bookies scene, where the protagonist comes out of the bookies drunk and looking for his dog 'Fido'.  We changed the name of the dog to Fido because we were shooting a swede and it was supposed to be a comic version. Working title version. We filmed the protagonist coming out of the door of the bookies. Instead of filming at the bookies we filmed outside the school swimming pool. We shot a long shot of the actors coming out of the door. Then had another camera on the actors which was a medium shot. So that we could choose the different shots and which would work better. We then shot 'William' killing the dog. Instead of filing the dog being kicked we filmed from a long shot and 'William' drop kicks the dog and the dog goes flying. We film the dog flying through the air with three different camera shots.

The second shoot that we re-filmed was the funeral scene. Before we filmed the scene in the 'Hobo-centre'. We found some difficulties with this scene due to lighting. The lighting of the scene was quite dark and we found it difficult to choose angle shots that flowed well and got all the actors in. However this time we worked outside. We filmed on grass. The scene was lit up well and we used an establishing shot to get a feel of what was happening. Then moved into a closer shot. Over peoples shoulders and behind the priest (Charles).

The final scene that we shot was the protagonist (William) running into the shop and hiding. In the film Tyrannosaur the protagonist runs into a charity shop and hides behind a clothing rack. Therefore we decided to film the scene in a  mac store. Because we work in a classroom full of macs this is where we set the final scene. We filmed William running in and jumped under the desk full of macs. We again had two cameras therefore when it comes to editing we have choices of cuts and edits. When William was running in we have shots of him running in and we using a low close shot, this was giving him a sense of power. Then the lady who comes up to hum offers him a bottle of champaign instead of a cup of tea. This is again showing us the swede side of our shoot.

ScreenPlay

Production Script 

Scaife Studios and Brightness Studios 
Bradford, Ilkley
Tel: 07825241194
Email: scaifestudios@gmail.com
Brightnessstudios@gmail.com

Opening: Ident - production Company and titles

Starts with extreme long shot of new house - sign outside "sold" introducing the new girl (protagonist).

(Moves inside house)

Extreme close ups of the females getting ready - don't see all detail E.g Faces

(Showing the contrasting between stereotypical and counter typical females at a high school)

Throughout we are showing the title through props E.g makeup on the mirror - lipstick and cereal.

Film girls walking around the house and out the front door - learns they are neighbours - long shot can see their full body - comparison

Male walks past shouting "hey" at the stereotypical female, the counter typical then thinks he's waving at her - disheartened