Final Cut

In my final cut i added the titles that were hand written and then created in illustrator 

The shots of Sarah towards the end are breaking the fourth wall by looking at the camera, this give extra intensity for the audience

With breaking the fourth wall the audience can connote that sarah is a threat to the audience 

Final Cut With ident

Issues with this cut:

Some camera recorded audio has been left in the edit causing sound problems.
The film title is not on screen for long enough.
Following feedback from other media students and my teacher, I feel that the film ending is still a little ambiguous, so I have decided to simplify the sequence in a way that suggests to the viewer that the protagonist is about to kill the antagonist in the graveyard
I have decided to redo some of my titles so that they fit better with industry conventions.

Final Cut - with out Ident

What is on this cut:

• All the scenes shot
• Titles
• The soundtrack 

What isn't on this cut:

• My ident and Naimhs ident

Audience Feedback:

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