Final Cut - with out Ident

What is on this cut:

• All the scenes shot
• Titles
• The soundtrack 

What isn't on this cut:

• My ident and Naimhs ident

Audience Feedback:

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Rough cut five

Feedback:

• the music works - however it sounds like it is on a loop
• where is the changing point (volta) in the music
• the titles don't fit the genre

What is in this cut:

• titles
• title of "Neighbours"
• non-diegetic music created on garageband
• all the scenes 

What isn't in this cut:

• Final titles 
• scene three
• ending

Rough cut four

This was my initial idea for titles.

• Feedback was that it didn't really fit the genre of the film.
• The genre being black comedy the sans-serif text didn't really make an effect on the genre of the film.
• The text was too friendly and comical.
• The placement of the titles are good - using the shots effectivly.

Rough cut - three

• I have now added some testing titles. 
• Not too sure where to put them in comparison to the rest of the opening.
• We still need to shoot one more scene. Should be done by the end of the week.
• Reading of letter - over voice
• walking out of houses - showing they are neighbours.

Feedback:

• The testing titles don't fit the genre of the film 
• too many transitions 
• The title "Neighbours" doesn't work by being on is own. Needs to use the backgrounds - not what you would usually see on this genre of film.

What is in this cut:

• testing titles 
• transition of titles
• "Neighbours" title 
• All the scenes apart from scene three

What isn't in this cut:

• scene three - walking out of houses showing the antagonists are neighbours 
• not sure on the definite titles
• Non-diegetic music created on garageband by Rian

Rough cut two

Feedback -

• Less transition shots is more. 
• Voiceover will be effective in the real shoot, giving the audience information of what is happening in the first two minutes; reading a letter from Isabelle too Sarah.
• Jumping edit doesn't work - scene one - shots in bed; need to see more of the protagonist at first sight.

What is on this cut:

• Scene one
• Scene four
• diegetic music
• overlapping 

What isn't on this cut:

• Scene two
• Scene three
• scene five
• non-diegtic music
• overvoice - reading of letter

Rough cut one

Feedback -

• The overlapping scenes look very good and are effective. 
• The last scene builds tension well and works.
• Try keep the camera still for a more polished look.

- Teacher

What is on this edit:

• All the shots from scene four
• shots of Niamhs cousins 
• Diegetic music

What isn't on this edit:

• Scene one
• Scene two
• Scene three
• Scene four
• Titles
• Idents
• overlap over letter reading
• Voice over
• Non-diegtic music

Editing:

• Transitions
• Overlap of scenes - opacity of over lap 33%
• Speed up of the tracking shot
• Slow motion of panning shot - graveyard - overlap - opacity 30%