- I have now added some testing titles.
- Not too sure where to put them in comparison to the rest of the opening.
- We still need to shoot one more scene. Should be done by the end of the week.
- Reading of letter - over voice
- walking out of houses - showing they are neighbours.
Feedback:
- The testing titles don't fit the genre of the film
- too many transitions
- The title "Neighbours" doesn't work by being on is own. Needs to use the backgrounds - not what you would usually see on this genre of film.
What is in this cut:
- testing titles
- transition of titles
- "Neighbours" title
- All the scenes apart from scene three
What isn't in this cut:
- scene three - walking out of houses showing the antagonists are neighbours
- not sure on the definite titles
- Non-diegetic music created on garageband by Rian
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