Feedback -
- Less transition shots is more.
- Voiceover will be effective in the real shoot, giving the audience information of what is happening in the first two minutes; reading a letter from Isabelle too Sarah.
- Jumping edit doesn't work - scene one - shots in bed; need to see more of the protagonist at first sight.
What is on this cut:
- Scene one
- Scene four
- diegetic music
- overlapping
What isn't on this cut:
- Scene two
- Scene three
- scene five
- non-diegtic music
- overvoice - reading of letter
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