Feedback for improvements

1) Although you have attempted to keep up with the media terminology in your blog, there’s room for improvement. There needs to be more use of it throughout your blog and when you are describing your own film, think about denotation and connotation and signifiers and add these terms to your descriptions (in pink. Or some other colour!)

2) Your analysis of Donnie Darko and Heathers are very good but you also need to blog on the conventions and history of your chosen genre.

3) Your production schedule (call sheet) needs adding with dates and times. There generally needs to be more evidence of planning. You could also add any communication between you, Niamh and your actors to show evidence of planning.

4) Your rough cuts need to be more in number and with more detailed explanations – what works, what doesn’t work, what needs to be improved etc.

5) Finally, you need to gain some audience feedback on your most recent cut. Ask friends from your target audience to watch the film and collect feedback from them either using video or a questionnaire etc.

Blog Improvements

Actions I am going to take to improve my blog:

Check Spelling 

Change font and collar of text

Add context to films analysed 

Highlight key terminology

Break down paragraphs