Feedback -
- The overlapping scenes look very good and are effective.
- The last scene builds tension well and works.
- Try keep the camera still for a more polished look.
- Teacher
What is on this edit:
- All the shots from scene four
- shots of Niamhs cousins
- Diegetic music
What isn't on this edit:
- Scene one
- Scene two
- Scene three
- Scene four
- Titles
- Idents
- overlap over letter reading
- Voice over
- Non-diegtic music
Editing:
- Transitions
- Overlap of scenes - opacity of over lap 33%
- Speed up of the tracking shot
- Slow motion of panning shot - graveyard - overlap - opacity 30%
