Final Cut - with out Ident

What is on this cut:

• All the scenes shot
• Titles
• The soundtrack 

What isn't on this cut:

• My ident and Naimhs ident

Audience Feedback:

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Feedback - audience

I have had multiple people watching my opening, some people from our target audince and some family members.

Target audience - teenagers // media students
   Rough cut Three

• The music fits well with the timing of the shots.
• I lilke the title of neighbours, where it is placed with the background looks good, it looks like it is under lining it bringing your attention to it.
• The continuity of the shots are well edited.
• Edit the music to have more of a rythmn, gradually building up because at the moment it is quite similar throughout.
• Slow down the beggining shots of Sarah and Isabelle so we can get a good idea of what they look like and who they are.
• The scenes from their bedroom to the school jump quite a bit - there is no connetion. (Because we hadn't shot the scene inbwtween just yet, we have now addded this scene - 12th of Feb).

Target audince - teenagers // friends
   Rough cut Three

• It's good I like it.
• I'd proabably watch it if I new more about it.
• It all flows really well together.
• The music brings it all together really well.
• I like the ending, it sums everything up and leaves you wiyh a sense of mystery.
• The editing of sarah following the girls in the graveyard works really well (the overlapping of the shots - girls walking away from sarah).
• Maybe inprove on the colour scheme - some of the scenes were different colours to the others.

Rough cut five

Feedback:

• the music works - however it sounds like it is on a loop
• where is the changing point (volta) in the music
• the titles don't fit the genre

What is in this cut:

• titles
• title of "Neighbours"
• non-diegetic music created on garageband
• all the scenes 

What isn't in this cut:

• Final titles 
• scene three
• ending

Rough cut four

This was my initial idea for titles.

• Feedback was that it didn't really fit the genre of the film.
• The genre being black comedy the sans-serif text didn't really make an effect on the genre of the film.
• The text was too friendly and comical.
• The placement of the titles are good - using the shots effectivly.

Rough cut two

Feedback -

• Less transition shots is more. 
• Voiceover will be effective in the real shoot, giving the audience information of what is happening in the first two minutes; reading a letter from Isabelle too Sarah.
• Jumping edit doesn't work - scene one - shots in bed; need to see more of the protagonist at first sight.

What is on this cut:

• Scene one
• Scene four
• diegetic music
• overlapping 

What isn't on this cut:

• Scene two
• Scene three
• scene five
• non-diegtic music
• overvoice - reading of letter

Rough cut one

Feedback -

• The overlapping scenes look very good and are effective. 
• The last scene builds tension well and works.
• Try keep the camera still for a more polished look.

- Teacher

What is on this edit:

• All the shots from scene four
• shots of Niamhs cousins 
• Diegetic music

What isn't on this edit:

• Scene one
• Scene two
• Scene three
• Scene four
• Titles
• Idents
• overlap over letter reading
• Voice over
• Non-diegtic music

Editing:

• Transitions
• Overlap of scenes - opacity of over lap 33%
• Speed up of the tracking shot
• Slow motion of panning shot - graveyard - overlap - opacity 30%