Feedback - audience

I have had multiple people watching my opening, some people from our target audince and some family members.

Target audience - teenagers // media students
   Rough cut Three

• The music fits well with the timing of the shots.
• I lilke the title of neighbours, where it is placed with the background looks good, it looks like it is under lining it bringing your attention to it.
• The continuity of the shots are well edited.
• Edit the music to have more of a rythmn, gradually building up because at the moment it is quite similar throughout.
• Slow down the beggining shots of Sarah and Isabelle so we can get a good idea of what they look like and who they are.
• The scenes from their bedroom to the school jump quite a bit - there is no connetion. (Because we hadn't shot the scene inbwtween just yet, we have now addded this scene - 12th of Feb).

Target audince - teenagers // friends
   Rough cut Three

• It's good I like it.
• I'd proabably watch it if I new more about it.
• It all flows really well together.
• The music brings it all together really well.
• I like the ending, it sums everything up and leaves you wiyh a sense of mystery.
• The editing of sarah following the girls in the graveyard works really well (the overlapping of the shots - girls walking away from sarah).
• Maybe inprove on the colour scheme - some of the scenes were different colours to the others.