Improved screenplay

Scene one 

Girls getting ready
 Sarah  (Niamh's room)

• View of bedroom panning over to her bed.
• We hear the alarm going off. 
• Hand homes out from under the duvet and knocks the alarm off the desk along with other objects.
• Moves duvet from over head and sits up abruptly. 
• Stands up and film a tracking shot following her downstairs to the kitchen.
• Shoot her back seeing what she is wearing.
• Gets cereal out spills it - giving us a title 
• Gets milk out - shuts fridge - note on the fridge another title
• Slump walk back upstairs and goes back to bed 

Izzy (Tias room)

• Shot crosses over - creating a split screen
• Her alarm goes off. 
• see girl with face mask on laying neatly in pink duvet
• Places hand on the alarm clock
• Gets up smiling 
• Tracking shot to back room - looking in mirror

Sarah (Niamhs room)

• Looks in mirror 

(See both girls looking at camera - we see their faces)

Izzy (Tias bathroom)

• Does make up into camera

Sarah (niamhs bathroom)

• Brushes hair and walk out 

Izzy (tias bathroom)

• does make-up
• switch shots to behind izzy - spills make-up showing another title

 Shown alarm clock, both actors on screen ( split screen )
The screen showing Sarah widens, we then see a sequence of her getting up, walking to the bathroom. 
Titles possibly in makeup, clothes and breakfast - cereal -
Through out this showing glimpses of Izzy getting ready.
Camera shots on clothes and semiotics - not showing protagonists faces.

Scene two 

(Extreme long shot - both houses in shot)

Walk out of their houses simultaneously - different walks showing different personalities 

• Sarah walking at a pace putting rucksack on shoulder 
• Izzy walking out strutting and looking around
• Both exit driveway at the same time - not making eye contact.
• Walk separate ways

We then see that the live next to each other, leave walking opposite directions.
Both on screen (shared driveway - walk out together)

Scene three 

( in school reception )

• Izzy, Amy and Tia walk through the entrance as the doors open. In triangle formation. 
• Keep walking towards camera 
• Walk past we see the doors shutting in Sarahs face - sarah looks panicked.
• someone lets sarah in she then walks in towards the camera (front on)

Scene four 

• We see girls (izzy, tia and amy) surrounding a grave (Ilkley cemetery)
• Sarah hidden in a bush around the church, dressed in normal clothes watching the girls. 
• While we are shown the the group looking down at graves; we see flash backs of girls in a field and old photos that give us the indication that they used to be friends.

(Faded shot) Sarahs face - then continues with her business. 

• two small girls running in a  field
• faded screens
• sketchy playing of old videos

Scene five 

• Girls walk through the drive way
• stop
• make eye contact then continue walking next to eachother 
• Black out - bang title of film appears on screen.
• Flash on screen - photo of girl getting crossed out 

Both girls walk into shared driveway - make eye contact (shot reverse shot)
continue to walk into house - tracking shot of sarah into her house
(Low shot) Sarah - crossing picture of wall of girl